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Rod Hirsch's avatar

Golly! That’s how you write a short story. Although I’ve heard of ‘Q’, to the best of my knowledge I’ve not read any of his work until today. Thank you, Victoria, for the overdue introduction.😊

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

You’re very welcome, Rod. I’m glad you enjoyed it 😊

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

"And at the back of it, as the woman had said, in street and side-lane and blind-alley, I heard the footfall of a multitude more terrible than an army with banners, the ceaseless pelting feet of children—of Whittingtons turning and turning again." Powerful stuff!

Q would have been familiar with Marvell's lines:

" But at my back I always hear

Time’s wingèd chariot hurrying near;

And yonder all before us lie

Deserts of vast eternity."

I feel there's an echo of them here.

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

Thank you, Jeffrey. A very short piece, but yes, very powerful!

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Vicki Winslow's avatar

Wonderful story - a master class in sketching believable characters using broad strokes.

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

Thank you for reading, Vicki. I’m glad you enjoyed it! :)

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Terry Freedman's avatar

Interesting. Funnily enough, the only thing I'd read of his until now was his advice to "murder your darlings"!

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Richard Kuslan's avatar

I've owned since the age of 18 and read (and re-read) many times since, his Oxford Book of English Verse, 1250–1900. It was an expensive hardcover volume when I bought it, the best book purchase I've ever made.

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

That sounds lovely! Thank you for commenting, Richard ✨

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Jodi's avatar

And I wish to know what happens to the young boy. It can feel that the many poor of that (any) time are faceless masses, but each of them here are revealed.

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Tony Watkins's avatar

Excellent. I wonder who Arthur Quiller-Couch was every time I go up the back stairs of the Old Divinity School In Cambridge, where there’s the Arthur Quiller-Couch Room, but I’ve never bothered to find out. I assumed he was some former professor of divinity or great benefactor. Now I know he wrote wonderful short stories like this I feel much more inclined to find out.

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

That’s wonderful, Tony. I hope you enjoy your research… :)

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Ivonne Soret's avatar

So much in a short space of writing. Excellent! 👏

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

I’m glad you enjoyed it, Ivonne :)

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Jaimie Pattison's avatar

This is so vivid. I’m not sure I breathed in the time it took me to read, yet there is so much said in so few words. Thank you for introducing me to a new writer

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

You’re very welcome, Jaimie :)

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Jillian Hess's avatar

I love his name as much as his writing!

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

It’s marvellous, isn’t it! :)

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Danny Hoback's avatar

Very nice

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