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Maureen Moeller's avatar

Heartbreaking and so cleverly written in first person pov. Loved it.

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

Thank you for reading, Maureen 🩶

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Marina von der Ruhr's avatar

So poignant. How many lives like that...

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

Thank you for reading, Marina ✨

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Rod Hirsch's avatar

So sad. And so beautifully written - a whole world in a few hundred words. Thank you for posting it.

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

You’re very welcome, Rod. Thank you for reading :)

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Homi Hormasji's avatar

What amazing control in telling such a powerful, yet poignant, story.

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

Thank you for reading, Homi ✨

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

And some say the short story is dead: No way!

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

Thank you for reading, Mary 💛

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Deer Girl's avatar

Loved this one!

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Victoria K. Walker's avatar

Thank you for reading!!🧡

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